DM-Cidande, Chavez's first attempt

[Chavez]

Ya i've been trying to map myself, any comment welcome :clown:

http://one.fsphost.com/nst6ldr/maps/DM-Cidande.ut2

PS: It's my first one, don't go too hard on me yet :>

[DW_WailofSuicide]

Ya i've been trying to map myself, any comment welcome :clown:

http://one.fsphost.com/nst6ldr/maps/DM-Cidande.ut2

PS: It's my first one, don't go too hard on me yet :>

Looking pretty good so far, actually.

I think it's too small to go on the server currently. You're going to want to expand it for sure.

It's a little brown, and your lights are unsourced, but you've got a sort of consistent theme going on nonetheless-- And at least it's not humanoid architecture concrete.

[Chavez]

Looking pretty good so far, actually.

Thanks :)

I think it's too small to go on the server currently. You're going to want to expand it for sure.

Non-DW member created maps go on the server? :O I'll do my best :D

It's a little brown, and your lights are unsourced,

I knew i missed something, thanks for pointing it out.

but you've got a sort of consistent theme going on nonetheless--

Could you explain what this means?

And at least it's not humanoid architecture concrete.

Yeh, i don't like those maps, mini-me maps are bugging me as well -_-''. Next map will be more alien/factory style, and i'll keep your points in the back of my head.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Chavez]

Also, i tried to add textures, did not work (regardless a guide i followed). And i can't seem to add much more text into the description of the level then 1 line :/. + i have no idea how to add a screenshot.

[Desko]

I've had dreams about maps like this. It's great, I agree with Wail though. Needs to be way bigger, and the ceiling is so low I feel claustrophobic, otherwise, it kicks ass.

[DW_Hornet]

but you've got a sort of consistent theme going on nonetheless--

Could you explain what this means?

It's actually a compliment, It means you aren't just throwing content into a map and doing w/e, your actually thinking things out. This makes it easier to get a sense of being in a different envoirment. A map for example that has no consistent theme is ONS-Gordons box of pwnage.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Theme

[Zax_Gentoo_Box]

*shudders and remembers all the pwnage that took place in the box*

[d2frob]

I'm gna have to check this out n if its the small map i've heard of im gna love it :cheers:

[Flak_Monkey]

/clap very nice this map will bounce rocks around making it hard and then give good bases for the noobs to hide in and protect

[Desko]

Maybe not so much just the noobs, but for the experienced players as well, I've always wanted a map with a base you could defend. Hold the Camp sort of fleshed that out, but lacked something, maybe it was the fact that there are hiding spots that people are invulnerable and safe in, but your map will, I think, prove to be fun and challenging and I hope to see it on the server after it has been completed.